JOURNAL SET 1 ( REFLECTION ENTRY )
THE INCREASING INTEREST IN BEAUTY
Day by day, the importance given to
physical appearance is increasing. I think this results from people's desire to
win recognition or respect from the others. This lead them to be more and more
beautiful as they think that when they are beautiful, their friends or
companions will accept them easily. Indeed, it is true; that is, everbody is
drawn by the outer beauty. For instance, surely you had such experiences in
elementary or secondary school that a beautiful girl or a handsome boy has so
many friends and their thoughts or ideas are regarded as more important from
that of the others. You can always see a lot of people around such
people because of their recognition resulting from their beauties. It also
might be the desire to be admired by the opposite sex. It is a fact that a
person who is beautiful or handsome, and has a good-looking is admired by the
other because one's having beauty creates a good impression on people on the
first look. For example, the guys always look for the girls' beauty first of
all, and the girls are same, too. If a girl has uneducated or not smart, rude
but she is beatiful there are still many guys want her and if a guy is a bad
person but he has good-looking, so the girls still like him. Moreover, I am of
the opinion that if one is beautiful, he/she has more chance in work life in
terms of being hired as most of the employers are influenced by the appearance
of the candidates in job interviews, and of course their decisions are also
shaped in this way. For instance, what I realize in every company is that all
staff members or employees are good-looking people and generally the managers
are handsome or beautiful, too. As far as I understand, it is important to have
a charisma in work life for every stage. That is, outer beauty is also
important for work life. The beauty is gaining more and more importance,
and if you have outer beauty most of the doors in life is open to you.
*This lead them to be...
YanıtlaSil*there are still many guys want her
*most of the doors in life is open to you
Dear İnci,
I like your journal very much. Your writing style and subject is very successful. You chose an important and interesting subject. I totally agree with your ideas. But when I am reading your journal, I see some spelling mistakes. Also, the sentence " but she is beatiful there are still many guys want her" is mistaken. In the second sentence, there are twwo verbs. There must be a relative pronoun. But if you correct these tiny mistakes, your journal will be greater. I like your journal. :)