23 Aralık 2012 Pazar


JOURNAL SET 2 ( REFLECTION ENTRY )

                                                BRINGING MOBILE PHONES TO SCHOOL

These days, more and more students bring their cell phones to school and it has been a controversial topic recently. I believe that students should carry mobile phones in case there happens a bad thing, but I object to phones being used at school particularly in the classroom. Many students travel to and from school without their parents and they might need their mobile phones in the event of an emergency. Therefore, students should be allowed to carry their cell phones with them to school, but at the entrance of the school, they should be made to submit them to authorities and while leaving from the school, their cell phones should be given them so that they can call their parents in case of something bad on the way to home. I said that they should leave their mobile phones while entering the school because in an educational institution whatever disrupts or spoils the class should be removed out of the classroom. In this regard, nothing can be more disruptive during a lesson than the sound of a mobile phone ringing or playing an annoying tune. Moreover, there is one more point to underline that students who have mobile phone in class do not pay attention to the lesson. Instead of focusing on the lesson, they make something on the phone such as playing games, sending messages, and surfing on the internet during the lesson, which prevents them from getting what is told about that course.  On the whole, cell phones may be brought to school, but should not be used during lessons.

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  1. Dear İnci,
    I like your reflection enrty about whether cell phone should be used in school or not and is it useful for student? Nowadays it is one of the most important topic.That is, you chose a very good topic to discuss and comment on it.What is more;I like your sentence.You wrote almost every sentence orderly and correctly in terms of grammar.However; in the third line,maybe correct sentence can be " ..some bad things happen there". "I object to being used phones at school.." is the other wrong sentence for me.İn the 4. line; may be travel is the wrong verb for this sentence.I think "travel" can not be used for going school.Correct verb is "go" for me.Except for that;your using English and topic is perfect. Thank you İnci :)

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